Dawn Battle
"And now my sweet -" he broke off suddenly as I heard doors burst open and slam against walls with explosive force. The Dark Father’s attention wavered then left me to focus on whomever had intruded. He sinuously got up and left me in the cold, bitter darkness he had doomed me to. Soon after he left, I heard a savage fight ensue, from the sounds I could distinguish, it seemed as though he fought a pack of monstrous beasts.
I immediately crawled to my feet, and tried to navigate my way through the room with nothing more than sound and touch. I listened to make sure the fight never came too close, and I felt for obstacles in my way.
Suddenly the fighting sounded a lot nearer than was safe, then someone bumped into me and almost immediately pushed me into someone else, whom I recognized as Luciferous. he pulled me away to the relative safety of a wall, and left me to resume his fight farther off.
’Why did he do that?’ I wondered in confusion, ’Why does he want me safe and, in fact, why does he want me at all?’
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Fire Blind
"Do you not see my dearest? Do you not understand? I love a challenge, and you will prove to be quite difficult in breaking, quite difficult indeed," then his eyes hardened once again, "however, your defiant ways must not be encouraged, nor must you be allowed any chance of escape, so I will take from you the one thing I have no need for," and his smile returned then, chilling in it’s utter cruelty, "I need not your eyes so that is what shall be taken, your sense of physical sight!" he then covered my eyes with his hand, spoke words in a tongue strange to me, and suddenly, all went black.
A scorching pain shot through my skull like wild fire burning throughout my head. Such pain that I screamed with it and through it all I could hear his laughter echoing through the room.
When the pain abated to bearable level, I whimpered helplessly as I came to realize that he had indeed made me blind, just as he had promised.
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Blue Darkness
When next I woke I was in a strange bed, I could see nothing of the room beyond for the immense darkness that filled it. Then I felt a movement close to me, and I knew I was not alone.
I jerked upright, preparing to leap from the bed, but a man’s hand suddenly reached out, grabbed my arm, and pulled me gently yet forcefully back down. A dark bluish light slowly filtered into the room, so it was not quite so dark, but neither was it bright enough to reveal much more than shadowed figures.
I saw him then, he seemed somehow familiar, but I could not quite grasp the memory. I stared at him trying to remember, trying also, to stay calm as he leaned over me, smiling seductively. Really though, he was quite handsome, his skin was colored like bronze, his eyes were like midnight, his hair so black it shimmered. He seemed so strong, so was deceptively gentle, yet I could see the cruelty and sadistic glee glimmering in his eyes.
Then I knew him, I knew where I’d ’seen’ him, it was from my dreams that I knew him.
"Luciferous!" I whispered in sudden fear, for it was indeed The Dark Father, one of the most feared and reviled demons who inhabited the darker realms of Aiyana.
"So, you know me then? That is good," he smiled wider, "that is very good," and he laughed the sound of it as it echoed about the room so vile it turned my stomach.
I knew I had to escape him, but how? No one escaped The Dark Father once he claimed you as his own, ’But I am not his, nor shall I ever be! I am my own, and I shall escape him even if I must die to do so!’ I thought.
He must have seen the defiance in my eyes for his own hardened and his smile turned cold, "You can not escape me you know, no one ever has, and no one ever will, least of all you, my sweet. You are much too important to be lost. You are mine now, and you will always be mine forever more," he stared at me, his gaze intense and utterly frightening. He meant to scare me, he wanted me to submit to his will.
But I would never do so, I had always known that I would never submit to anyone, no matter how much pain I must suffer I would never be broken.
So I stared at him, my eyes reflecting my hate and determination to never bow down to anyone who would think to own me. He could see this, he could see the strength of my own will, and he knew I would never allow myself to be broken, yet, this seemed to please him inordinately.
It confused me as to why this should please him, but I soon understood, as he took great pleasure in explaining it to me, laughing as he did so.
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Midnight Dream
Two nights ago at exactly midnight, I woke up crying. I had just had the absolute best most wonderful dream in the history of ever! I had dreamed I’d actually, truly gone to Aiyana for real! Aiyana is this world that I dream about a lot, and also write about.
I had dreamed I’d gone there and had such adventures and romance! It had all felt so real! But it had ended before it was really over, it was just so unfair!
I had then looked out my window in time to see a twin tailed comet flash by, and I made a wish, fool that I was. I wished that I could really go to Aiyana, that I really could have adventures and find romance. That it could all really be true!
Then I felt so extremely exhausted and I collapsed back upon my bed.
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In case you have never seen this type of formatting, I shall explain it to you: in the post title there will be a format like this [chapter title: scene title] For my story is divided into chapters and scenes, each scene will constitute one post, the book is actually part of a series, the title of this particular book is Aiyana: the Coming. I have written two chapters thus far, begun the third, and have an idea for the fourth.
If any of you readers out there have any ideas as to what I could do next, it would be vastly appreciated if you could share them, because it seems that at this moment in time, I am locked in a writer’s block and can not seem to find any ideas.
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Heyla!! I didn’t get much sleep last night, only got to bed at around 2:00 in the morning, but I did sleep in a bit, so I’m not too terribly tired. I hope you all are ready to read, cause I’m certainly ready to write.
I’m thinking that I shall be using this blog for the posting of a story I am writing called Aiyana, if you have any suggestions, criticisms or comments of any sort on any part of this story, please post it, but please, keep it appropriate.
This story may not be suitable for children or those who do not like violence and other R rated themes.
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